Two comments……….
1. Why have 3 columns of words, when on screen you can’t see the bottom of the first column, so have to keeop scrolling up and down to read!
2. More importantly – if I was a Business Manager being asked to supprt a case for one of my employees, alongside the word promises, I would need to see a budget BEFORE I could possible approve. Why can we not see current expenditure on each of the headings followed by planned expenditure. That would only add around 10 more pages to an already enormous document!